I need to work on analyzing my quotes and have more critical thinking. I think I am able to show that I have good general ideas but I need to further talk analyze those ideas and show more details. I also want to make my essays flow better and have smoother transitions.
I didn't realize how short my essay was and with the kind of college writing style I was going for, I need to be a lot more specific and analyze into further detail. My ideas also need to flow more into the next idea and just write smoother. I also had some minor grammatical errors. Most importantly I need to develop more critical thinking and go into deeper analysis.
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